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Seven layered sins did rise;
Crimson moons to the sky.
The eclipse of celerity suns,
Plagued forth with entombed a sacred sight.

Fallen mercenary myth,
Dog faced dogmas to stigmata hand
Where Ankh charms corrode the sands.

Three layers of symmetry
Brought to him imagery
Of how she laid and rid of men a waste.
To the fates of whores and their wretched smells.

Cancer to bring about the age of modern plague
Where a scarab dance was soon to surely see,
Malicious puppetry upon the bitterness of amputated limb.

Lovers quarrels , and murdered children
Bring to him visions scorched on coffins in tongues forgot.
With his hands bound in chains,
Eyes dangling to the ground on twine,
Where he sewed up his soul.
For words to escape would be to tell more.
The sights of pharaoh death,
Where god struck down with furious winds.


A curse upon the tongues of lasses
In which the future he had scripted first.
Before prophecies had even name
Scripture of holy war
Where Babylon would surely fall
And injustice prevailed upon the hearts of glory.

Oracle cursed and bound,
Gagged and hung,
Show forth allegiance
Spoke forth in damnation
Of serpent tongue.
©2003-2009 ~elusivesin
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How the story continues, you guys should critique me more. I do hope to make a good collection out of this :-P

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:iconpretty1dreds:
i'll have to read this again later and give it my full attention, at least you caught my eye with it...

ica

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for that kiss wast all that was given, that kiss that so pleased me, that kiss in which everything then soon followed, ever lasting friendship forever sealed with a kiss

ica
:icondarkcrescendo:
Again, a brilliant use of imagery. I have no doubt at all that I have missed a fair portion of the meaning, by not having the background knowledge of some of the concepts portrayed. Nonetheless, an excellent piece of work.

Benedictions.
:iconpretty1dreds:
this is fucking perfessional writing u should get this fucking published and shit because i mean wow! holly fucking shit and i'm all about the egyptian shit man (as in my religious beliefs are mythical egyptian) your words are perfectly put together and omg! i can't beleive this kind of stuff can be found on DA, you have wowed me

(i told you i needed to read i again tfor the credit it deserved)
BRAVO!

ica

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for that kiss wast all that was given, that kiss that so pleased me, that kiss in which everything then soon followed, ever lasting friendship forever sealed with a kiss

ica
:iconbonnita:
wicked absoluty fab and love the pic too

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